Tuesday, 21 February 2017

Moment writing: Splash Planet





Splash Planet

I was at splash planet and me my mum and my mums friend daughter  called Holly, we were  going down the slide. My mum was screaming really loud when we went down the slide. The people that were behind flipped there tube.Apparently my dad could hear my mum's screaming  from the way over there.

4 comments:

  1. That was so funny, you told the story well.
    I can't believe you managed to get me on the slide on my own! Brave mum!!

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  2. grate job.that sounds like fun.

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  3. That must of been funny HAHA!!. 1 to 10 how loud was your mum

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